Final Screening- Brother

After making changes from our previous screening we have come to our final screening.

This screening was a way in which we could gain feedback and comments in relation to the film and mostly the changes we made. Yet again we had problems saving but we managed to over come this problem.

We produced a short Questionnaire based upon our footage and the changes we made based upon our last questionnaire we filled out.. We asked general questions from which we could gain the audiences opinon and also their critiscism. In our Questionnaire there were questions.

Verbal Feedback:

Written Feedback:

Good

Liked the foot transistion and the sound effect at the end. (fight scene)

The beep noise and the fight sounds creations

The arguement between the two guys good

Conrad scene showed pretty well in comparison, the blue fiulters and white flashes yet again makes it effective in portraying the character

The fade of music into different scenes was good

Reshoots were effective

Use of similar characters

Title fade to black

Bad:

Confusing as to what character is who.

Continuity was slighlt lacked

Flashes were not continous but cold have been longer

Title could have flashed in rather than fade in , to make it cointrast the white flashes

The train sequnce is not as striong as the first sequence, hard to differriate

Lack of lighting could ba a problem...